As is vividly depicted in the picture, in the center of the picture is a hot pot（或者写container） which contains (或者写includes )various dishes. What impresses me most is that these dishes are entitled as different cultures such as Peking opera and kung fu . We are informed by the caption that “Culture is like a hot pot which is delicious and nutritious ”(61 words)

写法一(由坏转好版)：①Simple as the picture is , the real purpose of the author is to inform us of the significance of adopting(或者assimilating/absorbing) native and foreign cultures in modern society.

① 划线部分是上课重点强调的模板句，强调主题的重要性。本文的中心是“吸收、学习各种文化（或者是中西文化）很重要”

②Such a scenario is particularly worth praising against the social background that people in growing numbers

这是一个典型的将积极现象转为消极现象的句子。见冲刺班讲义P26 “越来越”上课多次强调，见P15

focus too much attention on wealth and fame , totally turning a blind eye to the value of traditional and modern

“重视”上课讲过是每年必写，见80个词汇第二个 “忽视”每年必写,见冲刺讲义P18

cultures ,which has aroused deep concern. The underlying reason for such a problem is that our society has become

“关注句”每年必写，见P15 原因句，每年必写见P15

increasingly benefit-oriented and ignores mental cultivation .In fact ,taking in various cultures can broaden our

见冲刺班讲义P35 本短语见补充讲义之“洋节与中国节”

horizons and enrich our mind ,which is beneficial to our all-round development. If we can not take a correct attitude

开拓视野，丰富心灵，每年必写！见补充讲义之36个常见词组 “影响句”每年必写。见PPT “全面发展”见80个核心词汇。

towards diverse cultures , we would pay a high price sooner or later. (130 words)

天龙八部第八部，见冲刺班讲义P16

写法二（积极现象版）Simple as the picture is , the real purpose of the author is to inform us of the significance of adopting(或者assimilating/absorbing) native and foreign cultures in modern society. The past few years are accompanied by the phenomenon that people in growing numbers attach great significance to taking in Chinese and alien cultures. The underlying reason for such a fact is that economic globalization has promoted exchange of rich Chinese culture with other cultures. These cultures can not only broaden our horizons and enrich our mind but also promote the communication and interaction between people.(或者照抄冲刺班讲义P16：Since the trend of globalization seems increasingly far-reaching, culture exchanges can effectively and efficiently improve mutual understanding and friendship.) If we can not take a correct attitude towards diverse cultures , we would pay a high price sooner or later. (122 words)

To conclude, it is essential for us to derive positive implications from the revealing drawing. For one thing, society as a whole should forge a wholesome atmosphere to accept, appreciate and advocate native and foreign cultures ; for another, individuals should be sensible enough to select the refined and discard the crude. Only in this way can we expect to head for a brilliant future. (64 words)

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