The professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than the sports and entertainment persons. Do you agree or disagree？ （来源于网友回忆，可能略有出入）

　　先分析，比较好切入的方式是反对，因为大家在复习剑五第二单元的时候应该准备到过几乎类似题目：Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

　　一 确定文章结构

　　Introduction: 转述原文+表达观点disagree

　　Body: cause 1 2 3

　　Conclusion：disagree+ 升华

　　二 Brainstorm

　　为什么要给明星那么多钱？

　　给大家提供多条思路，考试的时候想到2-3条后，发展成段落就可。

　　向内看，可以先看明星们本身。

　　1 经济角度

　　比如著名的美籍华裔花滑选手（ice skater）关颖珊(Michelle Kwan)，父母是香港人，到达美国后努力工作，开了饭馆。关从小就表现出惊人天赋，父母也很开通支持，但是随着时间流逝，关的训练费，服装费等加在一起超过了5万美元一年，使得父母sold their apartment and purchased a smaller one to find money to pay for her ice skating

　　提炼观点：

　　The high payment serves as a reasonable reward to the large deal of money the athletes spend on their profession.

　　论证方法：推荐举例

　　2 健康原则(身心健康)

　　体育运动员包括娱乐明星的工作训练都十分不正常，intense training and overwork, 所以使他们更容易受到疾病或伤痛侵袭，高的报酬是一种补偿吧。

　　1) Since athletes have to train intensely and entertainment stars to work overtime, they are susceptible to injuries or illness. （身体的）

　　论证：推荐解释+举例子

　　比如足球运动员经常血洒球场，娱乐明星们很多都有stomach trouble或者厌食症（Nervosa）

　　2) Moreover, being over exposed to the public, the celebrities are prone to stress and anxiety due to their loss of privacy. （心里的）

　　论证：因果链+举例子

　　向外看可以看到明星们所影响到的更多人。

　　1 经济原则

　　A number of athletes and stars benefit the public by diverting their earnings into philanthropy.

　　举例子（兰斯阿姆斯特朗，美国自行车运动员，96年被查出患有睾丸癌testicular cancer，98年复出之后获得七次环法冠军Tour-de-France, 并且还把收入用于建立癌症基金会Lance Armstrong Foundation）

　　2 身心健康

　　Since a great many youngsters regarding certain celebrities as the lighthouse in their life could be motivated by the positive examples of their idols, it’s sensible to reward those stars who present a good example to the youth with higher income.

　　举例子（兰斯阿姆斯特朗，澳洲歌手凯莉米诺格都是癌症患者，但是却用实际成功的抗癌经验激励青少年朋友要有绝望中寻找希望的勇气）

　　三 成文

　　开头段

　　1 自己的话转述原文

　　Noteworthy is the fact that some athletes and stars incline to receive a higher salary than the “professional” group, namely, doctors, nurses, teachers and researchers who, in most people’s eyes, contribute more to the whole society.

　　重点句型：表语前置的完全倒装

　　2 表明正反双方看法

　　Their high earnings have triggered the complaint of some people about the unfairness of the society. To be exact, they argue that doctors have to spend more than 15 years learning before being called a physician, a surgeon or a dentist. More importantly, it is their jobs, instead of those of sportsman and actors, that are directly related to the public’s well-being.

　　By contrast, some stars, in their minds, just unfairly become well-known and then wealthy due to several movies or records.

　　重点句型：强调句+ 插入语

　　3 表明自己的观点

　　As for me, I am against their point for the following reasons.

　　中间段

　　1经济角度

　　P：The high pay serves as a reasonable reward to the large deal of money the athletes spend on their profession.

　　拓展方式：因果链+举例子

　　I: It is obvious that nurturing successful stars in both fields of sports and entertainment costs a lot. Specifically, it is a prerequisite to pay high tuition fees for professionals coaches. Take American-Chinese Michelle Kwan, five-time World Championship holder in ice skating as an example. In order to develop her natural talent for skating, her family sold their hard-earned apartment to cover the annual training cost of $50,000 in the 1980s. Moreover, her family also had to worry about her expensive dress and skating boots.

　　Concerning the entertainment field, financial burden on the artists is no less than that on the athletes. For example, a common Chinese student in Shanghai Theatrical Institute has to spend more than RMB 10,000 per year recently, 150% higher than the average level of RMB4000.

　　E: Therefore, they reap what they have sown when receiving generous remuneration.

　　重点句型：形式主语句+比较句

　　重点内容：句间逻辑关系（语义联系+过渡词联系）

　　2 健康问题

　　P: Moreover, being over exposed to the public, the celebrities are prone to stress and anxiety due to their loss of privacy.

　　重点句型：非谓语动词

　　I: In fact, celebrities in the limelight, be they in developing or developed countries, are inspected by the public holding magnifiers nearly second by second. For example, when a movie star has dinner with a common friend, some journalists may hide in a certain place or even sit beside them for the whole night, taking pictures with their advanced mini-cameras and then exaggerating the meeting into either a dating or a quarrel. To make it worse, a number of paparazzi often trail their targets all the way until they reach home. That could partly explain why a large number of stars have problems like insomnia or depression.

　　重点句型：插入语+非谓语动词

　　中间内容：句间逻辑关系

　　E: Therefore, it is imperative for us to put ourselves into their shoes, and to understand why they need to earn as much as they can so that they can hire more bodyguards and can move into a residential unit with a first-class security service.

　　重点句型：形式主语句+并列成分+目的状语从句

　　结论段

　　Thus, after full consideration of their dedication and sacrifice, it is wise to provide sportsmen, singers and actors with higher payment in compensation for their prior financial output and for their invaded privacy. In that case, some obstinate people are expected to remove prejudice against the players and performers and to show due respect for them.

　　关键：同义替换题干中的体育明星和艺人。